India is
the world's second biggest grower of rice and wheat & may very well produce
a record quantity of food in the 2013-14 season as monsoon covered the entire
nation early.India has world's highest percentage of arable land area &
second largest in total(after US) coupled by the fact that it also ranks first
in gross irrigated croplands, an obvious corollary would have been the
non-existence of hunger & malnourishment in India but such is the criminal
& strange paradox of plenty that in india millions still go without
food.Not only this to further substantiate a brilliant example of hunger amidst
plenty it was ranked 66th in Global Hunger Index.Even after 45yrs of the Green
Revolution India provides a unique spectre of overflowing warehouses & rotting
grqins on the one hand while.millions go to bed hungry.
Spurred by
the agricultural innovation & generous subsidies, India now grows so much
food that it has a bigger grain of stockpile than any country except china
& it exports some of it to countries like Saudi Arabia & Australia.Yet
1/5th of its people are malnourished , which is double the rate of other
developing countries like Vietnam & China.This glaringly ironical situation
has been under constant neglect from the government.
The
explanation of this anomaly lies in the complex regulations that govern
procurement & distribution .One major problem is the storage of the
grains.For past 25yrs the storage capacity has not been upgraded at all.Part of
the grain is officially stored outside warehouses, where chances of rotting are
high.The current storage facilities are quite inadequate.Granaries are filled
beyond capacity & many are in deplorable condition.The above problem is
further compounded by infrastructural barriers like insufficient road network
& transportation.Consider the example of punjab which has been blessed with
rich & fertile soil and is popularly called as bread-basket of India.It has
been reeling under inadequate incentives and investment for procurement &
storage of food grains.Of 14Million ton of wheat to be purchased by State
govt's food & civil supplies deptt., Punjab currently has space to store
only 6Million ton.This has forced state govt to look for alternative storage
spaces in empty mills,abandoned factories ,schools & even graveyards.Meanwhile
its open sites are overflowing & slowly spoiling grain from previous
years.So the need of the hour is to setup a network.of grain silos &
warehouses & godowns across country .This would redice the burden for stock
holding of wheat by the producing states and they can also be used for
effective distribution among the poor.Another problem is the inefficient &
corrupt system used to get the food to those who need it.Just 41.4% of the
grain picked by the states from central warehouses reaches Indian homes,
according to a worldbank study.Officials all along the chain, from warehouse
managers to shopkeepers, steal food and sell it to the traders, pocketing tidy
,illicit profits.Many families have still not got their ration cards and they
hesitate in.getting them due to bribery involved.Some States like TamilNadu
& Chhatisgarh have made marked improvements by using technology to track
food & have made it easier for households to get ration Cards.India should
move towards giving poor cash or food stampsas US ,Mexico & other countries
have done.That would eliminate mismanagement because govt would.buy and store
only enough grain to insure against bad harvests thus solving the twin problem
of wastage and of providing maximum outreach.
Recently
food security law has been passed by government of India which gurantees 67%
population nutritious food at very low prices.This is an another step towards
achieving food security.If implemented correctly this law would not only help
in exterminating the problem of hunger and malnourishment but also help divert
the excess grain procured by the govt thereby eliminating the wastage of
grains.
The visuals
of food rotting speak volumes of the criminal apathy,neglect & callousness
on our part with which we, as a nation have failed to address the shameful
scourge of hunger.
India is
facing a major food problem ,arising mainly from poor policies,infrastructure
& corruption but it can be resolved with sincere efforts on the part of
government by strengthening the market support system & establishing a
network of storage spaces across the country.
Every piece
of grain wasted is a cruel joke and a slap on the faces of millions of children
living under poverty and malnourishment.Perhaps if policy makers could realise
the gravity of what Gandhiji was trying to say when he said " There are
people in this world so hungry that God
cannot appear for them except in the form of bread.
Perhaps its
high time that India puts the national Agricultural ox before the cart of being
a major global power.
Absolutely perfect.. Rite from the beginning to the end. The quote by Gandhi in the end is the cherry on the cake. I was trying to find it for my essay too but couldnt. Pretty impressive.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome. From introduction to the conclusion, right approach has been followed. Although various illustration has been cited, yet they have not consumed irrational space. This is very good sign. Avoid difficult english words as much as possible to pour the feeling in its content. In one go, Essay is quite impressive, balanced, topic oriented and wonderful. Keep It up. All the best !
ReplyDeleteExcellent essay luv. i think u put all the right things at right place with some minor mistakes of data like it is 63 instead of 66 and for malnutrition figure is around 40-50%. u should also mention regional imbalance like govt. should also consider untapped potential of eastern states, regional scarcity of food grain like kerala food deficit states. BTW uor essay is superb except data other points are not as much necessary. yea one more try to avoid difficult words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy for your review.
ReplyDeleteI also think that i missed out on some points.
Regarding usage of difficult words i dont think i used very tough language.Infact for essay to have some standard i think usage of good words is necesssary .Similarly an essay without depth of ideas and simply containing flowery language is also not desirable.
All in all i strongly feel that in order to make essay interesting and captivating a good vocabulary is necessary so that to stress a point one can use some good words.
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